Interview Paper 2

The interview paper didn't turn out too bad. I ended up writing on one of my high school wrestling coaches. Jones was a good choice because he contributed significantly to my development into a young man. I really need to add some length to the paper; I was rather mentally blocked at the time of composition. With the addition of a personal section and another on his contributions the paper should be up to par. Brandon's paper was interesting because he had all the filler and necessary information, but struggled with claims and his thesis. As soon as this get altered he will have a solid paper. Smith's was over all really good, significaly better than mine and Brandons.